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Your chosen brief is appropriate – a film
opening. It’s not entirely clear if this is a movie or a TV drama… I would
clarify this and then build it into your planning (e.g. if it’s for BBC3 then
you’d want that branding somewhere in the opening sequence). It obviously fits
your critical investigation very well but I’m not sure if the extract you’ve
chosen to make is achievable – a death scene is notoriously difficult to do
convincingly.
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The other challenge will be technical – things
like framing shots and recording professional-quality audio will be defining
factors for this project. It was notable these were areas that the preliminary
exercise highlighted so we must make sure we learn from that. Casting is also
very important too (you won’t be able to get away with Sukhdev with a cushion
up his jumper for the real production!)
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Your planning on your blog is mixed – there’s
clearly some research and I like the way you’ve picked out certain scenes from
each text. However, I’m not sure you’re being realistic in terms of what you
can create yourself or indeed that you have a fully developed idea (your
thoughts seem to jump around a bit).
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Your schedule looks good – but obviously you’re
not really on track to meet it! It’s good you’ve built in time and we have days
over the Easter holiday available too if you need to re-shoot or re-edit
anything (this is likely).
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There are elements in the script I really like –
you’ve got a nice balance between the character on the phone and the father
figure. You need to be careful this doesn’t just end up a recreation of
Murdered By My Father because it will look very obvious considering your
critical investigation. There are notable typos and errors in written English
in the script – this doesn’t need to be submitted to AQA but it’s another
reminder this is an area we have to pay more attention to. In addition, the
script seems pretty short: be careful the overall production isn’t too short –
anything under three minutes will be difficult to reward at the higher levels.
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Along similar lines, your shot list looks
incredibly short for three minutes of film – 20 shots for 180 seconds of video?
I would strongly advise expanding this considerably before your main shoots.
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Post these tutorial notes to your MEST4
coursework blog as a new blogpost.
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The rough cut deadline is Wednesday 22 March –
make sure you are on track to meet this deadline.
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After pasting these notes in your blogpost,
write a numbered list of THREE things you will do in the next seven days in
order to move your Linked Production project to the next level.
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